It's a very good piece of work. But one might have the tendency to find himself questioning the events as they are subjectively presented by the narrative.
Paige has her romantic idealism. Kat has her brother. And Honey has her family. Personal factors that can always throw even the most straight-headed personality out of balance. One just has to place them in peril.
Do know that whatever you are now is the product of the decisions you made. Always remember that.